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Blow on high,
dance now crystal snow
Light the painted sky
touch the Earth below

Shimmering stars,
gentle flakes descend from heaven
Wisps of god-wrought joy
their blessings now are given

Fall so fair,
Heaven's boldest wings brought low
Blow on high
fly now crystal snow

Exhale once more,
the night now so alive.
Ghostly breath entwined below
above, a glorious sky

Snow globe scene,
a moment's grace suspended
Crystalline dreams
within a world so splendid

Blow on high,
fill me crystal snow
Embrace the glimmering trees
…and wake my slumbering soul.
Standing in a rain of snow, thoughts fly free and feelings flow...
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AshlonMedley Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
I love it
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Questingpoet Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:thumbsup:
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SilverWynd Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It has been a while, but this is beautiful. I think it is a wonderful way of cataching the essence and beauty of a new fallen snow.
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Questingpoet Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you my friend. I have not forgotten my proposal to collab either. I am in a quandary of personal issues right now and am barely writing. I will let you know when I feel up to it. Until then...I am glad for your attention and comments.
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SilverWynd Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome, and I will be here whenever you decide you want to do it.
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rainonwednesday Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
it reads like a lullaby. absolutely delightful...though this stanza: "Snow globe scene,
a moment's grace suspended
Crystalline dreams
within a world so splendid"

could be tweaked...it's a little saccharine. The rest is adorable. :)
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Questingpoet Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. glad you enjoyed it so. :)
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RequiemsandReveries Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
This is breathtaking and beautiful. Love the whole thing, can't even pick a favorite line, but I super like "fly now crystal snow"
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Questingpoet Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for your wonderful comments. that line is one of my two faves here and was originally in the opening phrase which drove the whole poem.
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SolusFallenwolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
snow snow snow!!! i love the snow :)
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